[Pre-production] Interim: Animatic_ver1

Animatic_version 1:


The background music and rhythm distort the story. More description of the character is needed so the story will be more engaging.





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Quick note taken after the consultation:

*Story:
****the cut btw each scene is too sudden, especially music

-emphasize the value of learning ballet/ being inspired by the toy
(eg gv more time on the cartoon playing—> belle wanna 

-when others laugh at her: blur Belle(front character) more


-montage: 
  1. higher speed, hardworking music, rhythm faster
  2. break the leg/ crash -> injury
-gv more comedy on the montage

-transition after falling down->longer & gv more time on pretending the ballerina is  Belle, emphasize how audience clap & whistle for the ballerina

-dun need to show the judges face

Final Theatre:
-final theatre: only one shot on leg
 -X emphasize the toy: too obvious

Final:
-make the artist more famous/ out-standing in drawing comics/ animation
-famous: maybe work at a big animation company?
make the wheel chair more obvious

-ppl dun understand its ff
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