[Pre-production] Interim: Animatic_ver1
Animatic_version 1:
The background music and rhythm distort the story. More description of the character is needed so the story will be more engaging.
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Quick note taken after the consultation:
*Story:
****the cut btw each scene is too sudden, especially music
-emphasize the value of learning ballet/ being inspired by the toy
(eg gv more time on the cartoon playing—> belle wanna
-when others laugh at her: blur Belle(front character) more
-montage:
- higher speed, hardworking music, rhythm faster
- break the leg/ crash -> injury
-gv more comedy on the montage
-transition after falling down->longer & gv more time on pretending the ballerina is Belle, emphasize how audience clap & whistle for the ballerina
-dun need to show the judges face
Final Theatre:
-final theatre: only one shot on leg
-X emphasize the toy: too obvious
Final:
-make the artist more famous/ out-standing in drawing comics/ animation
-famous: maybe work at a big animation company?
make the wheel chair more obvious
-ppl dun understand its ff
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