[Pre-production] Animatic_ver2
After listening to different people's opinion, I have modified the story and created another animatic.
Version 2:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BwojMkuLrrhmdEt2ZW9GTHUtbkU/view?usp=sharing
This time the story emphasizes on the toy but more establishment of the ballet interest can be added.
Opinion taken for myself:
-wt motivate her to work harder?
-montage: be more hard-working
exam—> audition (grown-up)
add growing up montage
- make things more dramatic & feel the importance (eg. from young to old keep on practicing)
-add more ballet related to the last scene
-draw studio, publish many episodes/ being praised
- add clothes to the transformation
- pace
- establishment of the character in the very front ==> ballet
- Treatment for the breaking: X sound, slow motion, echo, sound change of the BGM?, no need expression
- Acting for the character: exam: how to show her inner feeling (close-up instead of the medium shot
-make the transformation scene beautiful
-sad & montage too fast
-exam: how she struggle
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