[Production] S4 Climax: Transformation Test 2


The final part of the climax is the character fell down and broke her leg. The original version of the last sequence is a bit obvious and does not have any aesthetic on it. Luckily, I found out this presentation is a bad decision after consulting with my adviser.



Taking my advisor's comment and actual ballet performance as the reference, I tried to portray the dance of a dying swan to symbolize the accidence happened on the character. It looks more artistic and elegant, comparing to the first draft. Some chaotic effects were added to give the audience a clue that something bad is happening. Though this narrative is not as obvious as the above one, this treatment is more suitable.


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